Although I am the type to appreciate the gray weather we've been having, the prospect of returning to Assumption tomorrow and having to catch up with my work has made me a bit blue. To cheer myself up, I wrote an octet about a blue of a different kind.My Morninglight
The fringe of blue that coats the mountain range
Envelops Creation in just the way
That laughter's sung in every place she'll stay.
A sunburst spreads all through the silent, strange
Laspe in machinations once the joke's done:
My sole desire is to see that glare
About the lady with the child's stare;
I hope her slender smile might be won.
That, then, is all for now.
2 Comments:
Your poetry sucks monkey ball sweat.
Worldwarcheese, if you have nothing good to say about the poem, (which is excellent in its graceful language and word-painting) say nothing; or at least express your opinion more politely and give the Pundit some constructive criticism. It's easy to say it's bad; but why do you think so?
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